look through the opacity Ahead of you,
this life of yours is divinely orchestrated,
you jus need to push it through,
So look around-think-plan-work and
jus stop shittin your head
follow your passions..
shun those fake runs
and then Work is all Play...
everythin rv'ed up more meaningful
and Heyy
then you realise..
Life's Just so beautiful..
LIVE LIFE KING-SIZE..........
3 comments:
honestly speaking...this one is much better than ur previous writings...because it's more cheerful...u do tend to be pessimistic in ur outlook...i'm only judging from ur previous works...our sweetest songs are undoubtedly those that speak of our saddest thoughts...but i think we all enjoy listening to unmelodious yet happy songs at times...wat say?
any way...i am no critic, really..! keep writing...because (and i'm assuming this) it's very essential to unburden ur heart at intervals.
Well, lo thanx for goin through this and giving an honest comment..Its just the instanteneous instincts that drives such writings.
The last post probably was coz I m pretty much confused abt 2-3 points ,but certainly I m this sure neway would bring me pretty much success.THe confusion is like "u hv got to select 1 out of two candidates -Einstien and Newton"...either one is as gud as the other But u can choose only one So,naturally lose the other one for the time being.
So it depicts a Confused Me than Pessimistic Me.
Just Amazing ... and Focussed towards
ur GOAL
well .. have gone through all of your poems ... but this one is lucid in nature, can scintillate ur mind when ur dull .. when ur nt getting nything.
This one is Just impeccable.
Just keep expressing ur thoughts Like this ... and LIVE LIFE KINGSIZE
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