Monday, June 1, 2009

Passions Unkempt ....

When I say I love You , I do
When I say I am getting mad, I am
Close Your eyes, take a deep breath
and for all the world , feel the touch
that crawls on in your mind
that haunts you in your sleep
that warns to rob you of your heart...
I can see the chaos ,
the passion unkempt,
in your eyes, they twinkle like stars
I can listen to the waves
that beat against your firm mind,
They call you to embrace them
and flow in their amorous cadence,
rise as they swell
and calm when they abate.
I can feel the tremor in your steps
they cry aloud that its true,
and I reverbate the beats of your bosom
they hardly veil any clue.
Logic can never fathom love
nor can they decipher
the music that buzz our ears,
Let your soul feel the zephyr
Let the moment break the cipher
'Cause, this is the moment
the tong of a bell
This is the flame at peak
This is the moment of truth
And if you feel than think
this is true,
Why don't you tell me..
You love me too ?


Rebel Says.. said...

My Interpretation of Dawson to Rose - conversation !! had Dawson been a poet enough to muster than an artist !!

bhavika said...

i love the lines. nice introspection.
i assumed them to be frm a personal experience.

"When I say I love You , I do
When I say I am getting mad, I am "

the opening lines set the tone.
how well said. they show affirmation, passion, possession and strength. hw difficult to find in guys nwadays.

Rebel Says.. said...

AHA .. !!
I have got something then :)

Rebel Says.. said...
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bhavika said...

ahem..ahem..ur poem certainly does. :p

Cruiser Amit said...
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Cruiser Amit said...

lovely creation man...
once again...

anyways don't want to interrupt the ONE-TO-ONE chat...
go on Mr. U'VE-GOT-SOMETHING ...

Rebel Says.. said...

My poem-does for all u guys !
Thnx buddy...

paekut said...

real gr8 work man.....i easily relate to this....

the most conspicuous part is your nice vocab!

Rebel Says.. said...

nice to knw people can actutally relate this to something ..
Thnx ..

umang said...

Loved dis... I guess u knoe better than a gal that wen to say "yes" to a guy. Emotions mirrored or shud i say brought to life. Its like feelings are encountering u and not u encountering dem. awesm

sushri said...

Awesome lines..I just loved the opening lines and d last line stole my heart... ;))